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Ship

A ship sailing in the water smoother than a porcelain tile Is it facing the right direction? Or going astray all this while? A ship sailing in the water turning rough with a smile Is it really full of affection? Or is it dirty like the Nile? A ship sailing in the water becoming dangerous and vile Is it just full of perfection? Or has it become hostile? A ship sailing in the water about to crash on the isle Is there a chance of correction? Or has it failed the trial? A ship stranded on land broken, crushed, diminished It really needed a hand But now, quest unfinished

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Date: 3/4/2022 3:35:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." God bless you.
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Date: 3/2/2022 4:53:00 PM
I like the refrain being at the start of each stanza, nice!
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