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Shining Through

Dark corner Closed eyes Scared to open and see what you'll find Never ending days Walking through a daze Keep getting kicked back down Surprised when you hear a sound After so long Could it be? You open your eyes to see A light shining through Is it true? All this time So much has passed you by Hope surges Encourages You feel your strength return Nothing else holds your concern Grasping for the light The most beautiful sight That light shining through It's coming to you.

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/3/2013 4:44:00 PM

Hi Again, came back to see how you are doing. I hope this greeting finds you well.

Caleah Buil
Date: 7/5/2013 11:40:00 AM

It does! Hope you had a wonderful 4th of July! :D

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/27/2013 6:20:00 PM

Hi Caleah, you made my day by taking so much time to read many poems and provide such thoughtful comments. Thanks so much. Nice to have you back.

Caleah Buil
Date: 7/1/2013 12:01:00 PM

Awww! No problem!! I always enjoy reading your poetry so much. :D Why thank you! I've gotta write some poetry soon!! :)

Pace Ink-U-Script

Date: 6/27/2013 10:27:00 AM

Post more poems!! :)

Caleah Buil
Date: 7/1/2013 12:00:00 PM

Haha!! It's so nice to see that you missed seeing more of my poetry!! I know, I've been bad, I've gotta get back! ;) Thanks so much. :)

Pace Ink-U-Script
Date: 6/27/2013 10:28:00 AM

Not sure how I missed this poem...loved it!!!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/26/2013 7:53:00 AM

Yes enjoyed our trip, it was super hot. If you have a chance read my Girl Rising Poem, I think you will appreciate it. I also wrote a sequel called boy sitting. I hope all is well with you, have a great day.

Caleah Buil
Date: 6/27/2013 8:30:00 AM

Ha! That's Nevada for ya! :D So glad you had a good time! :D I haven't been on Poetry Soup in such a while! Been juggling with summer plans. :) Hope everything is good with you as well! I'll definitely be checking on your poems! ;)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/15/2013 7:31:00 AM

Yes a very hopeful piece. Sometimes it can feel like we are living in an endless winter but spring and summer do come and yes sunshine once again shines upon us and hope rises once again.

Caleah Buil
Date: 6/18/2013 4:00:00 PM

That's such a beautiful way of putting it!! :D Did you enjoy your trip??

Timothy Hicks

Date: 6/15/2013 1:07:00 AM

I can relate to that. When I first started writing and then showing my friends them, one of the complaints was that they were too depressing. First I just brushed it off and then realized they were right... now my goal is to just write whatever comes to mind, and do it in the best way I can.

Caleah Buil
Date: 6/18/2013 4:04:00 PM

HA! Mines too. My friend was like, "Whoa Caleah..you're getting dark." But hey, I write for myself so..yeah. Good for you!

Timothy Hicks

Date: 6/13/2013 12:06:00 AM

Reminds me of sleeping outside on the hammock and waking up to that "light shining through". Seems to me a poem about good thoughts and encouragements coming your way... love the positive vibes in this one :)

Caleah Buil
Date: 6/14/2013 1:03:00 PM

ooh, that sounds like nice times. :D Yeah, for once I was tired of writing depressing poetry. Haha! A little hope was needed. ;)

Cathy Moore

Date: 6/9/2013 2:50:00 PM

worderful

Caleah Buil
Date: 6/12/2013 8:58:00 AM

Thank you so much! :D