Shine On Me

A light in the window attracts the eye- from out of the darkness,never to die see more@ Rev 21:23/24

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Sharon Winter

Date: 8/18/2009 7:08:00 AM

This is so beautiful Brian, so uplifting. Warmest thanks for the great honor of placing in your contest. You are a strong inspiration in so many ways. Thanks for being here. love, shar xoxo

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/12/2009 4:45:00 PM

Brilliant write of the night's everlasting moonlight! Beautiful work, Brian! Love, Carolyn

James Fraser

Date: 8/2/2009 5:01:00 AM

Words so true Sir>>James

James Marshall Goff

Date: 8/1/2009 9:21:00 PM

beauty again! Brian! jimbo

Charlene Bird

Date: 8/1/2009 8:27:00 PM

Great Message Brian!!! Follow the light always!

John Freeman

Date: 8/1/2009 12:37:00 PM

That light is the light of all lights, you see thru that window, Brian, God bless, Moses

Nicole Sharon Brown

Date: 8/1/2009 8:01:00 AM

Love this one. Got me singing the hymn just from the title. I know the lighthouse will shine on me.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/1/2009 4:39:00 AM

Love this Cinquain. Love your faith put to pen. Sara

Diane Christian

Date: 8/1/2009 2:05:00 AM

Amen Brian, a powerful message to all God bless you from diane