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Shimmering Fire and Ice

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Shimmering Fire and Ice

Just over the hill
Beyond the slick black asphalt
misty rain blankets
Cascading through soft sunrays
Shimmering like fire and ice
~*~

12/02/12
(Category:  Nature)

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  1. Date: 12/5/2012 10:09:00 PM
    This is good. I wish you luck in the contest. Lucilla

  1. Date: 12/3/2012 7:18:00 PM
    I just love the imagery you used for this tanka. VEry nice!!

  1. Date: 12/3/2012 3:12:00 PM
    lovely tanka, Annalise

  1. Date: 12/3/2012 7:46:00 AM
    What a pretty picture you have painted. Good luck in contest.

  1. Date: 12/3/2012 7:17:00 AM
    Beautiful...BG

  1. Date: 12/2/2012 5:57:00 PM
    Excellent entry my sweet poet friend. Very enjoyed. Michael

  1. Date: 12/2/2012 2:03:00 PM
    an impressive portrait with immense imagery Annalise .. winning wishes for contest theme .. hope u r doing fantastic .. we r all blessed and loving ..

  1. Date: 12/2/2012 1:18:00 PM
    A beautiful way to describe it Annalise - wish you luck in the contest. - Hope the first week of December will bring out some Christmas cheer :) - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 12/2/2012 12:39:00 PM
    very nice, not what i expected when i read the title. i thought it would be another poem about diamonds. But I like yours better. best wishes in the contest. hugs, Catie :)