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She's Perfect

The way she walk, she never really rock, But still, I don't regret Cause for me she's perfect. Don't mind her yellow teeth or the way she eats, But still, When she smile My heart stops beating for a while. Talking about her weight which she almost hate, But still, she's great. How much she's getting older That much our friendship is getting stronger, That much our friendship is getting stronger, I don't regret Because for me she's perfect. I never wanted to lose her If I had to die for someone, I will choose her. I wish she knew By having her my dreams came true, That's why I don't regret Cause for me she's perfect.....

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Date: 10/18/2016 10:59:00 PM
anjali panghal, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT
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Date: 10/11/2016 11:15:00 AM
I'm sure she knows and you write well about her... words don't lie
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Anjali Panghal
Date: 10/11/2016 11:25:00 PM
:D,thanks,,ya i agree
Date: 10/11/2016 11:12:00 AM
Anjali,Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Anjali Panghal
Date: 10/11/2016 11:27:00 PM
i am new on this community,your crticism is welcomed,,ya i am very much intersted in writing poems and looking for oppurtunities,it will be my pleasure if you follow me,read my poems

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