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Shelter In the Storm

Elements gone mad Wind shrieks, rain pounds, thunder roars Your arms- my shelter

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 12/5/2012 11:33:00 PM
Nice haiku - love the third line
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/6/2012 12:19:00 AM
Thanks, Colin. I feel safe in my husband's arms....he just doesn't hug me enough! ;)
Date: 12/5/2012 2:40:00 PM
good to be in the arms of the man you love...pd
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/5/2012 5:27:00 PM
Thank you so much for your post! Yes, it is very reassuring! :)
Date: 12/3/2012 10:21:00 PM
Hi Eileen, this is a really great Haiku, with great imagery. Rollo
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/3/2012 11:14:00 PM
Thanks, Rollo! What a wonderful post! I appreciate it so much! :) Have a great evening! Hugs from Beirut.

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