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I’ve been sitting here for long lonely days In this small space that I cannot escape from. I am one of many other dogs in their own small spaces where we stay in a long row, all different sizes and types of us! There are so many of us here that when one of us barks, many others start barking us well. What a ruckus! I prefer the quiet of the place that used to be my home. People -strange people – walk past us. Often they bring children who are eager to pet us or play with us. Then our “spaces” may be opened and the children or older people be allowed to touch us. Sometimes a dog will leave with one of these families. We rarely see such a dog return. I imagine they are happy in their new home. Other times dogs are removed from their space but they do not leave with strangers. They are taken to a back room by one of the men here who feed us daily. Mysteriously, such dogs as these never return. They are replaced a short time later by other dogs that occupy their old spaces. I do not understand why they did not leave with the visitors who so often bring children. I keep remembering the day “my family” brought me to this awful place. My lovely mistress was crying softly. Tears filled her eyes as she kissed my head. She and my master were saying words I did not understand. I knew one word though. My mistress kept saying SORRY. It’s a word she used at my old home like when she had done something to upset the master. I didn’t do anything to make anyone angry. Why was she saying sorry when she left me here? Why was she crying? I had been such a good companion to her. I followed her everywhere she went in the house. She would stroke my fur each night as she and master lay in bed watching the talking box in the sleeping room. I would rest peacefully near her as we slept each night away. It’s been a while since she and master left me here. I feel very sad to think they won’t return, so I’ve been hoping to be released to one of the eager families that come here to visit, so I try hard not to bark. I know my master hated it when I barked. I was nice and quiet almost all the time, so why did they bring me here? I feel a weird and scary feeling about that back room. Something is not right about that place. Suddenly the man who feeds me has come to the door of my space they call a cage. He lifts me up and heads with me to that back room, and my tiny heart is beating so fast . . . Feb. 6, 2021 for Edward Ibeh's Break My Heart, Why Don't Cha Poetry Contest

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Date: 2/11/2021 7:55:00 PM
Very hard to read and very true. I have two rescues One good thing is where i live they sent out request to pick up dogs to help out during Covid and all of the dogs were not only picked up to help shelter, but were adopted. have to remember that but that was a special month. take care.
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Date: 2/8/2021 7:21:00 PM
I actually teared up Andrea. I grieve for those who meet such a fate. Congratulations on the win. Linda
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Date: 2/8/2021 6:50:00 PM
Amazingly poignant write! Congrats on your win, Andrea!
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Date: 2/8/2021 6:16:00 PM
Hi Edward, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on your winning write:-) Alexis
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Date: 2/8/2021 2:04:00 PM
Such a harrowing, heartbreaking personification poem, Andrea! Congrats on your win in my contest!
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Date: 2/8/2021 3:41:00 AM
This breaks my heart Andrea, so true.
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Date: 2/7/2021 9:29:00 PM
Heartbreaking poem. A favourite. Agree with all the comments below.
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Date: 2/7/2021 7:39:00 PM
Andrea, we recently adopted a shelter pet. I have been thinking about these same things lately, wondering how often our dog thinks about their former life, and how sad it must have been, to be abandoned. Whatever traits led to this, cannot be helped by the pet. They can only be what they are. Thank you.
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Date: 2/7/2021 5:57:00 PM
This is well done! I hope it encouages others to adopt a pet. You can see the one I adopted four years ago at one of my latest poems... "Felines in Action" Owning a pet brings serenity. Panagiota
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Date: 2/7/2021 1:17:00 PM
Ahh!! I think it will break his heart. Reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Sara
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Date: 2/7/2021 10:40:00 AM
Oh WoW! This one really did touch me so deeply and it makes me want to find that little dog and bring him home with me. An excellent write my friend. God Bless, JB
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Date: 2/7/2021 8:00:00 AM
Wow! You kept me hooked from the beginning till the very end, Andrea, great personification too:) poor dog...
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Date: 2/7/2021 7:16:00 AM
So touching dear Andrea..Your story leaves footprints in the heart..Magnificent piece!!! Best wishes in the contest..
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Date: 2/7/2021 6:59:00 AM
Heartbreaking story, Andrea. I see them quiver with anticipation. You touched every soul--everyone can relate.
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Date: 2/7/2021 2:26:00 AM
Great though sad personification on the story of an abandoned dog. How man can be so cruel? ~~
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Date: 2/6/2021 11:08:00 PM
Andrea, This is so real it hurts. All in the days of a dog who heard 'sorry'. Who will rescue us, when the time and place is owed its due. -Richard
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Date: 2/6/2021 11:05:00 PM
Oh I cried Andrea, such a sad, but wonderfully penned poem. So sad that pets are taken there for that reason, happy healthy dogs who would make another child and family very happy. Adopt a dog or a child and make the world a happier place. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 2/6/2021 7:24:00 PM
What a poem, it wrenches at the heart and doesn’t let go. My wife and I volunteer for an animal rescue group and we’ve seen the good and bad of shelters. If you don’t mind I’d like to share this with some of my friends. John
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Date: 2/6/2021 2:50:00 PM
How scary it must be to be a dog unwanted, and not certain of the next day. So many people treat dogs cruel. When I go to a shelter, I want to take them all home, thanks for the lovely read. good luck in the contest, Andrea
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Date: 2/6/2021 2:30:00 PM
WoW! Andrea, You hit the ball out of the park with this well written and heartbreaking write. Good personification of a dog. It was as though the dog was really speaking. My heart went out to the him; I could sense his loneliness from abandoned by his family. Nothing good happens in the back room. Well done. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day-Alexis
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Date: 2/6/2021 1:44:00 PM
You rose to the challenge well with this heartbreaker Andrea. Tom
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