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Sheetal

When i first laid my eyes upon you You looked so tender and fair With your deep amber eyes and your jet black hair when you spoke the angels sang and i knew from that moment i would love you until the earth no longer span With legs so long and skin so soft And after our first kiss My mind was lost No one has ever looked so good as you my queen So now i have said my piece And im glad your happy Glad your soul fly's free but i just want too say my love for you will always be

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Date: 6/13/2010 8:57:00 AM
Congratulations on being featured. Great job! Joseph
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Date: 6/12/2010 11:24:00 AM
Hey! Congrats on having you wonderful poem being featured this week, keep your pens flowing with passion. You are such a great writer
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Date: 6/9/2010 11:42:00 AM
Many congrats on your featured piece this week. Rgds Janette
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Date: 6/7/2010 7:50:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved featured poetry this week Cameron. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/6/2010 6:17:00 PM
Nice tribute to your love. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Wishing you continued success with your writing. Karen
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