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Sheer Streaming Curtains

Let sun's light so shine, As radiant curtained beams, Stroll among the trees. Inspired by Raul Moreno

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 12/4/2009 4:46:00 AM
Love it....RdP
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Date: 11/29/2009 8:43:00 PM
Great write!
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Date: 11/28/2009 10:34:00 PM
I missed this one..so beautiful the description you gave,your heart is full of light Marty beaming like the streaming curtain..excellent-Charma
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Date: 11/20/2009 3:57:00 PM
enjoyed reading, good luck in the contest!
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Date: 11/20/2009 6:56:00 AM
Kool Haiku Marty, best of luck in the contest >> James
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Date: 11/19/2009 12:47:00 AM
Best wishes with this one Marty.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments today.
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Date: 11/18/2009 5:43:00 PM
Wonderful Haiku Marty! Great visual too. smile, thanks for sharing. Good luck in contest! Love Light Patty
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Date: 11/18/2009 5:21:00 PM
Great poem, Marty, and good luck in Raul's contest.. I also have entered and this is great fun... luv how each poet who submitted an entry has differenct visuals of the photo ... amazing.. luv.. Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 11/18/2009 5:02:00 PM
Nice use of imagery and personification for an interesting view. Enjoyed it. Good luck in the contest. Karen
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Date: 11/18/2009 4:17:00 PM
just lovely and dear. Light & Love
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