Sheer Disbelief

A natural sense She looks in sheer disbelief Contours of her face Russell Sivey

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/24/2012 4:50:00 PM

this is nice. I can picture her disbelief, Russell.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/24/2012 11:02:00 AM

Opened ended work that leaves questions to be answered..Great idea to leave us wondering..Thanks for stopping by..May the joy of Christmas and the Wonder of the excitement of a small child be yours this season..Sara

Mehnaz Veetil

Date: 12/24/2012 6:51:00 AM

Lovely images. Enjoy and MerryChristmas , Love , Mehnaz

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/24/2012 3:44:00 AM

Good...bravo,Russell !!! MERRY CHRISTMAS AND A HAPPY NEW YEAR! Christmas Hugs from Anne-Lise :)

Jon A Cavanaugh

Date: 12/24/2012 3:43:00 AM

Merry Christmas Russell. Nice imagery here.

David Williams

Date: 12/24/2012 1:52:00 AM

Russell great image that I like, thank you for reading my poetry and a Merry Christmas and peaceful time to you...David

Rollo West

Date: 12/23/2012 10:22:00 PM

A great Senryu you have penned my friend. And Merry Christmas to you Russell, and have a safe new years. I enjot your works very much. Rollo