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Sheep Carriage

Night sky: lifeless, dull, chalky gray Apathetic expressions face one way Eyelids heavy, long day Foggy windows, potholed roads Warm breaths exhaled, the seats are cold Zombied stares at blinding screens Infinite autopilot, we're all machines

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Date: 1/10/2018 4:33:00 PM
Hi Ellie, I completely agree that is what traffic does to people. It zombifies us. Cleverly contrived once again.
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Date: 12/9/2017 8:02:00 PM
Well, Ellie...beautifully written...I retired last yr. at age 60...had to eject from the mouse wheel...just in time to regain sanity (some would challenge that assertion!) life is magical!
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Date: 7/5/2017 6:22:00 AM
I like it...
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