Shedding Stones

"Hearts very strong,hard like stone",we hear from ear, As hearts very strong,hard like stone,bear no tear, Dark black stone, from the heart pouring tear in fear, In sad of water in bottles for sale on shelves near,near! Thajudeen Muhammad Safa -Dharga Nagar Safa 05.11.2014

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David Meade

Date: 11/5/2014 7:15:00 AM

A prayer of tears is sometimes the only response to stone hard hearts. . . good write.

Muhammad Safa Thajudeen
Date: 11/5/2014 9:54:00 AM

Thank you for your gift of comment from your soft heart my dear poet David Meade.God bless you!

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 11/5/2014 12:10:00 AM

Some have very hard hearts indeed, and they can't or wont ever shed any tears for anything or anyone dead or alive. I Know sadly some people like that personally. Very nice poem my friend! :) love and light! xxxx D.

Muhammad Safa Thajudeen
Date: 11/5/2014 10:02:00 AM

Yes, coz of this segment of folks traveling on the road of peace got stopped before the red lights.Thanks for your lovely comment dear poet Dorian. -Safa