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Shed a Tear

Once jungle soil is bled dry, crops fail; more rainforests die. And since we have learned to fly, birds no longer fill the sky. It certainly doesn't seem right that geese get shot in mid-flight. And what about the whale's plight, defenseless in all its might? Toxic filth pollutes our air, coating cities bleak and bare. And those that say we should care; search for love that isn't there. Mourn the loss of things so dear, open your eyes; shed a tear. For life may soon disappear from rivers, once crystal clear. Like pawns in a game of chess, our dreams, it seems, are worth less. And with the world under stress, we cannot escape our mess. (Rhyme) 8/23/2015

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Date: 3/8/2018 10:42:00 AM
Such an important message, Emile. "Like pawns in a game of chess children inherit our mess. And growing up under stress they tend to smile so much less." Well done.
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Date: 3/8/2018 10:58:00 AM
Thanks Line, I appreciate both your comments and your support. Emile.
Date: 8/24/2015 8:10:00 AM
This is very moving Emile, much here to contemplate.
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Date: 8/24/2015 11:32:00 AM
Thanks Richard, I appreciate both your comments and your support. Emile.
Date: 8/23/2015 6:18:00 PM
G'day Emile... all for the mighty dollar. For what other reason would humanity destroy their home and then themselves - Lindsay
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Date: 8/23/2015 6:53:00 PM
Thank you very much Lindsay, your wise words are very appreciated. Emile.
Date: 8/23/2015 3:31:00 PM
Alas, the sad and ongoing blight of pollution that is killing our planet. You penned the sad emotions behind it so well, Emile! A 7 and a wonderfully, expressive poem, for sure!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 8/23/2015 6:52:00 PM
Thank you so much Laura, for this vote of confidence and encouragement. Emile.
Date: 8/23/2015 3:31:00 PM
Forgot the rating...!
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Date: 8/23/2015 3:30:00 PM
Such a powerful write with vivid imagery Emile - your words make me feel like crying:-( hugs Jan xx
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Emile Pinet
Date: 8/23/2015 6:55:00 PM
Thank you so much Jan, your comments are much appreciated. Emile.

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