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She Tore Into the Night

She tore into the night..... like little lightning bolts, With a carriage made of scents of him, sifting her soul ---- his touch..... she longed..... Neath that naked moon, meshed as one; not a star amiss ---- The twinkling of their kisses sweet stardust upon their lips, as soft skin greets biting tongues long to seeking love Up against a trunk of a maple..... his hands lifting higher her skirt, a deft brush upon her aching bosom, sugared surrender..... She met him again, waiting tall in the shadows, smiling (She did not wait) she tore into the night.....

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Date: 4/5/2014 11:45:00 PM
You must be Canadian!! A very passionate write, with a lot between the lines! Great poem!
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Keith O.J. Hunt
Date: 4/6/2014 7:15:00 PM
Thanks arthur! We Canucks are a passionate lot....
Date: 4/1/2014 11:43:00 AM
Very passionate work here! Vivid and sensual! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
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Date: 4/1/2014 6:56:00 AM
: ) ( She did not wait)-She tore into the night..Of course neath the naked moon the mood couldn t be better.An ardent and effrvescent poem Keith .
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Date: 3/31/2014 11:43:00 PM
WOW! Shifting her soul..... How sweet when passion like this takes controls of every feeling inside.... I love the poem... Linda
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Keith O.J. Hunt
Date: 4/2/2014 12:57:00 PM
:-) wink/wink/ BIG hugs! (love Keith)!

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