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She Took Me By the Hand

She took me by the hand My heart so true and sure She whispered in my ear Be prepared for love so pure We headed to a secluded beach As we lay down on the sands We kissed and cuddled for some time I'm now putty in her hands Her hands so warm and gentle I'm like a rose graced by the breeze We join as two on these sands of gold Our audience, the waves and the sea The moment as we capture Orchestral joys abound Our unification, our bonding souls In this wonderful surround http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/love-3.php

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/28/2009 3:45:00 PM

Once again, beautiful rhyme and movement and expression of emotion.. thankxx for your comments on all my postings today... important to me that other seasoned poets enjoy my verses and messages contained therein. I was just notified that I got Honorable Mention in Brian's contest... and he has just posted another one.. get those creative juices going again.. u too.. Linda-Marie

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/28/2009 6:16:00 AM

There is no more romantic place to celebrate love than on the beach. All the sights and sounds you describe seem to evoke unbridled passion as you lie hand-in-hand absorbing the sea's beauty. Excellent writing! Love you, Carolyn

Simone Segal

Date: 10/28/2009 3:04:00 AM

Very romantic, and beautifully written,thank you for your comments. love Simone

Pamela Griffiths

Date: 10/27/2009 7:29:00 PM

A lovely romantic, poetic and sensual scene. Pam.

Audrey Haick

Date: 10/26/2009 10:44:00 AM

Beautiful piece of work, James! I enjoyed it! Peace, Audrey

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 10/26/2009 10:11:00 AM

So you did go to the ocean... :) good for you. Beautiful write. I can hear the orchestra. Thanks for sharing and for your comment on my poem. Best wishes, Caroline.

John Freeman

Date: 10/26/2009 9:10:00 AM

Romantically inclined, James. A beautiful setting for romance on a secluded,sandy beach. Smile, Good job! Sincerely, Moses

Angelita Becerra

Date: 10/26/2009 8:59:00 AM

hey..i couldn't figure out the mail feature...i want to thank u for ur nice comments...and i love ur work...keep up the good job..Angelita