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She That Rivaled the Glowing Moon

She That Rivaled The Glowing Moon Thy *hyacinth* hair upon white shoulders laid bare thy face, mirror of love in heavenly skies. The miracle of thy body, so sweet and fair its soft innocence, destroyer of worldly lies. Walking behind thee, in steps where an angel trod among meadows, flowering in moonbeams there cast. Must be a heaven for thou art proof of a God that giveth to mankind a beauty that shall last. Thy touch, ecstasies that rival paradise ravishing smile, cool breeze blowing on a hot beach. In all the universe only thee will suffice to heal my aching soul and my heart, true love teach. Thou art my *Irene*, that I drink of thy calm! Blessed am I, to be soothed by thy kiss balm. R.J. Lindley June 26th, 1989 Poem Syllable Counter Results Syllables Per Line: 12 12 12 12 0 12 12 12 12 0 12 12 12 12 0 12 12 Total # Syllables: 168 Total # Lines: 17 (Including empty lines) Words with (syllables) counted programmatically: N/A Total # Words: 122 *************************************** 1. "hyacinth"- Luxuriant and curling 2. "Irene"- According the Greek myth, the goddess of peace 3. ****" balm"**** Home British & World English balm Definition of balm in English: balm noun 1 A fragrant cream or liquid used to heal or soothe the skin: ‘a skin balm for use after shaving’ **** 1.1 Something that has a soothing or restorative effect:**** ‘the murmur of the water can provide balm for troubled spirits’ 2A tree which yields a fragrant resinous substance, especially one used in medicine. ? balm of Gilead 2.1[mass noun] The resinous substance yielded by a balm. 3[mass noun] A bushy herb of the mint family, with leaves smelling and tasting of lemon. 3.1 Used in names of other aromatic herbs of the mint family, e.g. bee balm. Origin Middle English (in the sense ‘preparation for embalming, fragrant resinous substance’): from Old French basme, from Latin balsamum (see balsam). ***************** Note- I had her but my mad wild streak( I was 18 years old) drove her away.. She saw something in me that back then (1973), that could not stay.. Only many decades later, could it reemerge to remain and slay my demons....

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Date: 11/19/2016 8:02:00 AM
This may be my favorite Robert, my first time on this site to say....such beauty that you described is art. Thank you
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Date: 11/16/2016 7:59:00 PM
Your usual high standard, I found this enchanting and was in the mood to read just this type of poetry tonight! :) Cheers mate!
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Date: 11/16/2016 5:17:00 PM
Wow! That's all I can say, Robert, Wow! A fav for sure
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