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She Taps Her Foot Waiting For My Reply

my back to the class, i sneeze at white dust, i attempt to cough a single word… it’s just one – ~ seems someone’s erased just one gray spot ~ i scratch my head, until i cough cursive - white on black. ~ …and the discourse continues

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 12/16/2016 8:57:00 PM
Very cool image here, Kim! I likes!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/16/2016 10:35:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea :)
Date: 12/16/2016 9:07:00 AM
Wow, this was really cool Kim. Definitely makes one think. Nicely done.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/16/2016 9:19:00 AM
Thank you, Chris! :)

Book: Shattered Sighs