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She Sits Alone Contest

She sits to ponder, she sits to pray She sits here almost every day Alone in a vast space with no one to see her cry She wishes someone come along and break the lonely tie The disarray of her mind scattered on the ground Some pieces lost never to be found Alone she sits and Ponders this in the vast open space Why must every time one leaves another takes its place One thought trails away but not far behind is another But she continues to sit alone missing the thought of each other Someone to hold and someone to pry Pry into her life but not make her cry But until that day comes and she finds this dweller She sits alone, seeming to the outside as an old Helen Keller No word spoken no thoughts and nothing to see It took awhile to realize that this girl that sits alone is me

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Date: 8/4/2017 1:56:00 PM
All noble souls are a l?ittle a bit touched by melancholy. She sits alone expresses poetical experience of sadness and joy , smiles and tears like in Something Grave by Luigi Malerba, a poem in which aspiration and nostalgia may count the leaves of time. Best regards and wishes.
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Jade Carr
Date: 8/5/2017 8:48:00 AM
Thank you very much for your kind words, it means a lot when people enjoy my poems and let me know what they think

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