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She Sits Alone

Two gazes crossed in the crowded room Discreetly, without being discovered Sending a message that only someone Who is in love decodes its meaning Sometimes eyes reveal the feelings Buried in the depths of the soul Unrevealed and taken to afterworld For the fear of uncover the heart Wandering about the color of love Young lady sits in a wood bench Golden leaves falling as a shower Covering her brunette wavy hair Gallant gentleman approached the lady Talking about the azure hues in the sky Rising a curtain of hope for the future Only time will tell the happy ending For She Sits Alone Poetry Contest Sponsored by Eve Second Place August 10, 2017

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Date: 2/16/2018 3:57:00 PM
A poem that faithfully produces what is everyday life in a beautiful and hopeful way. The human touch. Very well done. Best regards from David in NZ
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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 2/25/2018 7:51:00 PM
Thank you David.
Date: 8/13/2017 8:18:00 PM
An intriguing and lovely poem. Congratulations on your win!
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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 8/14/2017 6:48:00 AM
Thank you Susan.
Date: 8/13/2017 6:24:00 PM
Thank you for entering my contest, Nayda , a well-crafted poem. I love the scene you've created of a romantic rendezvous, . Congratulations on your win. ~*
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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 8/13/2017 6:59:00 PM
Thank you Eve. Feel honoured with my placement.
Date: 8/11/2017 7:49:00 AM
Very interesting how love develops in two people's lives, nice write, Nayda:)
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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 8/11/2017 3:24:00 PM
Thank you Jo.

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