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Written April 24, 2016 ~ Entered October 13, 2023
Premiere Contest, “Pick A Topic Sentence” 
Sponsor: Miranda Hawley

She Never Smiled “There are many 'cures' for depression, some of them are drugs from a pharmacist, and others are creation by a loving God.” _ Prompt by Sponsor She never smiled, we should have known her heart was lifeless as a stone. But still, she went about each day, fulfilling all in her own way. She spoke thoughts in a monotone; she never smiled, we should have known. A spark was missing in her eyes, like clouded-over rain-filled skies. Each day she seemed to get through fine, for nothing signaled any sign. She never smiled, we should have known- and felt depression in her tone. And then the shock that she was gone- and not a clue acted upon. To seek God's help, we could have shown- She never smiled, we should have known.

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Date: 10/29/2023 11:42:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A powerful/sad write. We may never know the hurts others feel. Have a blessed day writing away.....................
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Date: 10/29/2023 3:07:00 AM
A deep, sad, very sorrowful truth, exquisitely penned, dear Sandra. Warmest congratulations on your well deserved trophy win.
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Date: 10/26/2023 6:53:00 PM
This was easily my most favorite of the contest entries I got, and frankly the best. I know a few people who have committed suicide and it was not people you would have thought would. Congratulations on your top win in my contest!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 10/30/2023 9:00:00 AM
Thank you so much, Miranda, for the great contest, and for my awesome placement! I am very pleased that you empathized with my poem and left very uplifting comments. Much appreciated! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 11/21/2017 3:25:00 AM
A beautiful sad write Sandra.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 11/28/2017 7:36:00 AM
Thank you very much, James. Sandra
Date: 11/17/2017 8:14:00 AM
Great quatern, Sandra, very well done. It is difficult to spot signs of depression, and even then, it is hard to do anything about it. Congrats on your win.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 11/19/2017 5:31:00 PM
Thank you very much, Agnes, for your congrats and supportive comments. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 11/15/2017 12:05:00 AM
Congratulations !!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 11/19/2017 5:30:00 PM
Thank you so much, Betsy! Sandra
Date: 11/14/2017 4:41:00 PM
So much truth in this write about how much and often depression is ignored or chalked up as he is fine he'll get over it. Congratulations Sandra
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Sandra Haight
Date: 11/19/2017 5:30:00 PM
Hi, Brian, thank you for your visit and very supportive comments. Sandra
Date: 11/14/2017 7:10:00 AM
Congratulations for your great win with this. So true Sandra.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 11/19/2017 5:30:00 PM
Thank you very much, Heidi! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 11/14/2017 6:51:00 AM
Congrats.. you blew my socks off with this...fantastic write and thank you so much entering the competition..
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Sandra Haight
Date: 11/19/2017 5:29:00 PM
Thank you so much, Craig, for the great contest and my nice placement. So pleased that you enjoyed my poem. Sandra
Date: 11/14/2017 12:36:00 AM
Congratulations on your great win, Sandra.
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Date: 11/19/2017 5:28:00 PM
Thank you very much, Subimal! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 5/9/2016 4:10:00 PM
congrats on your win with this beautifully penned poem, it touched me deeply
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Sandra Haight
Date: 5/9/2016 7:07:00 PM
Thank you very much, Broken Wings. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 5/9/2016 11:21:00 AM
I have known people with depression; it is not always that evident, and it can come as a surprise. Your poem treats this topic ably and with dignity. ~ Congrats on your merited win, Sandra! // Regards ... paul
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Sandra Haight
Date: 5/9/2016 7:07:00 PM
Thank you very much for your uplifting comments, Paul. I appreciate your visits and support so much. Snadra
Date: 5/8/2016 6:41:00 PM
sandra haight, Congratulations on your win. Always ~LINDA~
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Sandra Haight
Date: 5/8/2016 8:03:00 PM
Thank you very much, Linda. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 5/8/2016 4:57:00 PM
Sandra, Congratulations on your awesome win. Stop by and enjoy my latest blog, "American Dream." if you'd like. Hope you are enjoying your day. Happy Mother's Day **SKAT**
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Sandra Haight
Date: 5/8/2016 8:02:00 PM
Thank you so much, Skat, for the second chance and for my nice placement. I appreciate it very much. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 4/24/2016 7:18:00 PM
Excellent Sandra. I'm with Andrea great treatment of both form and theme. The repetition flows seamlessly..
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Sandra Haight
Date: 4/25/2016 7:01:00 PM
Thank you very much, John. I appreciate your nice feedback. Sandra
Date: 4/24/2016 5:35:00 PM
an amazing job with both theme and form, Sandra. Wish I thought of it. I love this form!!
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Date: 4/24/2016 11:08:00 AM
oh no Sandra, is this from experience? I hope not. Deppresion is such a filthy disease and there needs to be more awareness in the world. When we know someone who is struggling with depression or mania, its so difficult to know what to do for them. Sometimes they recover and sometimes they don't and that's where the tragedies lie. Loved it, best wishes for the contest :)-luloo
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Sandra Haight
Date: 4/24/2016 11:17:00 AM
No, Luloo, my poem is not based on experience, at least not the suicide part. But I have witnessed severe depression in others, and it is difficult, as you say, to know what to do. Thanks for the positive comment and wishes for the contest. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 4/24/2016 10:30:00 AM
Oh such a heartbreaking write on depression and eventual suicide Sandra:-( hugs jan xx7
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Sandra Haight
Date: 4/24/2016 11:17:00 AM
Yes, a heartbreaking subject...thanks, Jan. Hugs, Sandra

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