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She Is Gospel

When a woman is just a woman the world waits not for her wishes and woes It seeks to rape the rose of her youth and ravage her assertive reason, she must become more than mortal meat, she must rise to where hot spirit flows accelerating the bloodletting of her zen into a hostile zeitgist, she makes endurance a weapon, the gestation of her gestalt confronting the civil and savage alike, sharp beauty is all she knows becoming a love hunter with no remorse, womb driven, wasting no color of season, learning to weep over the bones of bastards, to scream through shadows, reaping light from simple eyes, heart uncommon Eve believes God as she grows - J.A.B.

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/15/2015 9:22:00 PM

I enjoyed reading this one again Justin.

Justin Bordner
Date: 7/23/2015 12:44:00 AM

You are a strong Poet Richard, I respect your work...J.A.B.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/13/2015 2:59:00 PM

Enjoyed reading your very emotive work that you have penned in this one..I am glad that I chose this one to read today..Sara

Justin Bordner
Date: 7/23/2015 12:42:00 AM

Emotions and Soul always lead to action Sara...J.A.B.

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 7/13/2015 8:33:00 AM

Lovely write......A.M.

Justin Bordner
Date: 7/23/2015 12:40:00 AM

Courage is often lovely Afolabi. J.A.B.

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 6/30/2015 2:49:00 PM

I immensely enjoy reading your page dear. It opens my mind to things that truly shine and matter.Always, Laura

Justin Bordner
Date: 7/1/2015 2:08:00 PM

Your heart matters to me...you inspire my passions Laura...J.A.B.

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 6/30/2015 2:48:00 PM

Love it, Justin.. : } " she makes endurance a weapon"..."the gestation of her gestalt confronting the civil and savage alike" ...Absolutely brilliant! From mortality, stretching and growing to spiritualism - with such intuition, strength and beauty, beyond the world is where all women should reach for so that they may see mother earth in full view, and understand we are creators of destinies we've never dreamed of.

Justin Bordner
Date: 7/1/2015 2:06:00 PM

You should love it my intense Poetess, you were born to triumph over suffering and ignorance...yes, creators of destinies that will define the indefinable, liberating the unbelievable Laura...J.A.B.

Kelly Deschler

Date: 6/28/2015 11:03:00 PM

When a woman uses her heart, mind, strength and soul at full capacity, she deserves to have the world at her fingertips... Inspiring and powerful lines, Justin! You have a great respect for the female gender and it shows...

Justin Bordner
Date: 6/29/2015 1:52:00 PM

Every great woman must transition from being a child of the world to a Mother of the world, just as every great man must transform into a Father of this world Kelly...J.A.B.

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 6/26/2015 4:08:00 AM

What a great write for a great woman, she extremely potent with all her experience through life and time. Enjoyable as always and am glad to see your write Justin all this while................A.M.

Justin Bordner
Date: 6/26/2015 8:42:00 PM

Every woman becomes a unique storm Afolabi, capable of many things...J.A.B.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/25/2015 8:04:00 AM

I like the biblical references. I also enjoyed the rawness of the piece, it felt like the aftermath of birth.

Justin Bordner
Date: 6/25/2015 1:35:00 PM

Spiritualism is quintessential to the truth of our journeying through this awfully strange world Richard. I am glad that the soul of this poem resonated with your beliefs. Yes, the birth of a warrior...J.A.B.

Alexis Y.

Date: 6/24/2015 11:17:00 PM

This is some woman! Great job:)Alexis

Justin Bordner
Date: 6/25/2015 1:26:00 PM

Every woman is born to suffer, fight, and attempt to attain grace and victory Alexis...J.A.B.

Kp Nunez

Date: 6/24/2015 7:06:00 AM

Glad that you came out with your own take of your theme, Justin. Excellently direct. Though deep, it does not hide but rather exposes more truth about the woman being just what she is. I guess I went extreme with my terse version. :-)

Justin Bordner
Date: 6/24/2015 8:24:00 PM

Every Contest premise that I share with this community of extraordinary writers begins as an original inspiration that I create composition with Kim...I am very honored that you're open to my vision Poetess...you are beautiful in the extreme Kim...J.A.B.