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She Is Free

There are thing’s in this life We will never understand Take the Ocean for example We watch the waves roll in And the waves roll out The never-ending heartbeat ---- Of Mother Earth ---- Most of us have no concept Of what lies with-in The vast space between her shores The Ocean holds a certain Romance That intrigues us all For the Ocean is a giver And a taker Of life She may allow us to sail across her Explore inside of her Study the life That lives with-in her Film the majestic wonders Of her depths But with all our technology The amazing ships we build To enjoy her We will never be able to tame her ---- For unlike us she is truly free ---- Inspired by laura's contest.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 10/4/2009 11:07:00 AM
A amazing poem Michael. Congrats on making the first round!! Love Light Truth Patty
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Date: 10/2/2009 10:34:00 PM
Michael, congratulations on making the first round of the contest...Raul
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Date: 9/30/2009 5:39:00 AM
Congratulations, Micheal! I love this excellewnt view of the ocean! Best of luck in the finals! Love, Robin
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Date: 9/26/2009 9:39:00 AM
Michael, just wanted to drop by and add--Congratulations on making it through the first round in the contest. Good luck in the finals! Karen
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Date: 9/25/2009 7:09:00 AM
Mr. Jordan,..congratulations on your first round entry to the contest !!! Great write Sir !!! james
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Date: 9/25/2009 4:26:00 AM
Magnificant poem, my dear Michael. Best wishes through to the next round. Love Lainie
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Date: 9/24/2009 7:04:00 PM
Hey Michael Congratulations making the first rounds on the finals! I hope all is well! Laura :)
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Date: 9/24/2009 12:51:00 PM
Dear MJ, Congratulations on being in the round-one finals! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/24/2009 12:23:00 PM
Great! Good luck Michael..dont think youll need it. BG
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Date: 9/24/2009 12:10:00 PM
Michael, congratulations in getting past round one of the competition, good luck mate >> James
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Date: 9/24/2009 11:47:00 AM
Mike..this is a beauty! Congrats...to be grasped by the marvels of life, is to grow =) farah
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Date: 9/24/2009 11:42:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem making it through the first round Michael.Wishing you the best in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/24/2009 11:33:00 AM
Dear Michael, Congratulations on your first Round Win Keep going GOOD LUCK YOURS ALWAYS...HG
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Date: 9/24/2009 9:21:00 AM
Well done,Michael best wishes in the next rounds.Rgds Brian
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Date: 9/23/2009 6:39:00 AM
Dear Micahel, As you know - I love the ocean and her many changing moods and power . she is - as you say TRULY FREE. Wonderful writing my friend. Love, Lainie
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Date: 9/22/2009 7:55:00 PM
Michael, congrats on your feature this week...Raul
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Date: 9/22/2009 6:39:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week Michael - awesome write >>James
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Date: 9/21/2009 8:04:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem being featured.. I love how you write it... very nice
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Date: 9/21/2009 3:22:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Michael. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/21/2009 12:05:00 AM
Congrats on your feature poem this week Michael.Rgds Brian
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Date: 9/20/2009 6:14:00 PM
I really like the visual aspect of this poem. So much truth in your words. Good last line leaves the reader with something to think about. Congratulations on being featured this week. Enjoy your honor. Keep on writing. Karen
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Date: 9/20/2009 5:53:00 PM
So nice to see this featured, Michael. So lovely to read again!! Congratulations!
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Date: 3/4/2009 12:56:00 PM
As always, it is pleasure to read your words. And thank you for reading mine.
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Date: 3/1/2009 3:40:00 AM
You are so right. I love the analogy and graphics I see as I read this lovely piece. There are somethings like you said, we just can't tame...powerful write. Continue to share.
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Date: 2/28/2009 3:30:00 PM
Oh WOW!! Michael this is absolutely breathtakingly beautiful writing, from the first line to the last, you had me encaptured, waiting to hear what journeys your words would make, and the ending must made it worth the while, amazing absolutely amazing...
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