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She Has Overwhelmed Me

I can show you relationship fulfillment, or at least the equivalent. Maybe mental gratification throwin caution to the wind call it lack of hesitation. She has written words something like loves personification. This is the epitomy of inspiration. I can smell her scent of desire like the smoke from her soul that has been set on fire and her essence is what I perspire. Oh this aroma... more gratifying then a doctorate diploma. She has brought out my emotions expressions and without question I embrace these romantic lessons. Caught up in her hurricane yet feel no pain so I dance in her rain. Oh this subconscious touch...almost to much to contain like a escaped blush beyond lust for this without knowing I already trust. Is this an attempt to embellish...no...call it an attempt to cherish wanting it all to myself so maybe you can call me selfish.....senses have been rendered helpless. She does not yet understand how willing I am to meet her demands as if they were my own commands. She is the foundation of meaningful existence so whether absence or great distance I will remember her mental fragrance and use it for my hearts guidance...I am overwhelmed.

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Date: 10/30/2012 8:24:00 AM
A pleasure to sit and read poetry this morning. We are getting snow from the Hurricane and the cold northern air coming down from Canada here is Piqua, Ohio this morning. I am glad your excellent poem was one that I came across to read. I hope you are having a good day and if you are in the mist of this weather that you are safe and remain safe Sha'ntez. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/29/2012 9:00:00 PM
Sha'ntez, wow... we want the extremes .... go the distant... .. good night~ PD
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Date: 10/29/2012 2:09:00 PM
Very expressive work...Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Sara
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