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She Has Gone In the Breeze

~ on the old oak table lie yesterday on the old oak floor steps fade away could this crumpled paper of thought rekindle everything that has been lost or must I simply sweep them away... a lifetime of endless dream vanish in the midst of the crackling flame of all the words spoken and all the silent beauty of love why must only pain remain... for now it seems a lost color, a lost poetic song and I, I sit silent upon the edge of tomorrow hoping I can arrive... ~ "Brian Strand Contest"

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Date: 7/8/2011 3:01:00 PM
Very creative work..Congrats on your win..Sara
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Date: 7/6/2011 9:16:00 PM
congratulations on your win.always Juanita.
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Date: 7/6/2011 12:17:00 PM
mesmrized... how nice to share the spot with you, rick.. my heartfelt congrats on your top win with lotsa huggs! :)
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Date: 7/6/2011 11:53:00 AM
This is awe-inspiring Rick, congratulations on your awesome win in Brian's contest ;)
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Date: 7/6/2011 6:23:00 AM
" the edge of tomorrow"..WHAT A GREAT LINE. Congrats on your win. BG
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Date: 7/6/2011 5:25:00 AM
congratulations Rick this number one winner is very deep love it
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Date: 7/6/2011 5:19:00 AM
Congrats Rick on being number one once again my friend with this fascinating write so excellent..luv..
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Date: 7/6/2011 4:16:00 AM
Congratulations ^Rick for the win in Brian's "A Poem From Thee" contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/6/2011 3:53:00 AM
So deep and moving, Rick. Many congrats on your FIRST PLACE WIN. Lainie
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Date: 7/5/2011 8:20:00 AM
What a way to start my week, reading the words that are flowing from your soul. May you find the inspiration each day to continue writing and sharing your wonderful poetry with us ^Rick. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/4/2011 3:58:00 PM
lovely words Rick.. dream like state of wishes wanting to manifest to reality through poetry.. luv this one.. happy 4th..
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