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She Found Love

Under this tree she finds love In this love, she finds hate Whilst in hate, Along creeps in fate Hand-in-hand with fate, Love begins to lose taste Slips gently again into hate, Love spreads its' wings too late Across the fine lines of her face, Bitterness draws more lines without space More lines of distrust, hate, An unwanted race with fate Swiftly swooped away to look up, She takes a quick gulp Her smiles mixes with uncertainties, Heaven smiles back with pity Fate pulls away hate, Love melts on her heart She slips back under the tree, Where she found love. "THOUGHTS OF A POETESS" NEOFLOETRY

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Date: 1/13/2016 8:46:00 PM
such a deep and beautiful love story... thank you for sharing. SKAT
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Date: 1/11/2014 12:58:00 PM
Great poem, Edwina. Romance is living through your deeply expressed words, enjoyable overall. Check out some of my poems, might find some you like. Peace
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Edwina Aleme
Date: 1/11/2014 1:47:00 PM
Thanks Jiril Clemons. I appreciate your thoughtful comment. I'll sure check your poems out,

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