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She Fell In Love and the Danger

She fell in love and in danger Gathering her wits and her gun To break up with dog in manger She fell in love and in danger He opened the door of chamber She fired a shot at her loved one She fell in love and in danger Gathering her wits and her gun
+++ September 13, 2014 Form : Triolet (Zeugma) Lines :She fell in love and the danger Gathering her wits and her gun. Fourth Place win Eight Syllabic lines (Total syllables 64)

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Date: 5/27/2015 4:57:00 AM
Deep thoughtful post
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Date: 10/2/2014 6:21:00 AM
Thank you for participating in my contest..I am sorry to be so long in saying my congrats to each one..I enjoyed reading this one..Sara
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Date: 9/24/2014 7:30:00 AM
Dr Ram An interesting and uniquely creative write. Thank you for the great comment on my Get The Facts poem.
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Date: 9/22/2014 2:52:00 PM
I think this is supposed to be 'fatal attraction', Dr! Congrats on your fine win. // paul
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Date: 9/22/2014 12:08:00 PM
In love the two main Zeugma lines Dr. Mehta. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 9/15/2014 10:39:00 AM
Oh good luck with this Dr, love the theme and the structure...
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Date: 9/14/2014 7:23:00 PM
Excellent job, Dr. Ram! My very best wishes for the contest. Thanks for reading "The Gift". Love, Annalise
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Date: 9/14/2014 11:46:00 AM
Great form. I loved reading it.
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Date: 9/14/2014 1:13:00 AM
hey you did a GREAT job, Dr. ram. I'll see you on the winner's list!!
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Date: 9/13/2014 10:25:00 PM
Nice Dr. Ram and good luck in the contest:)Tricia
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Date: 9/13/2014 4:38:00 PM
oh the drama! Nicely done x
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Date: 9/13/2014 7:35:00 AM
Ah that's awesome Dr Ram! Good luck!
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Date: 9/13/2014 6:30:00 AM
- Yes, this was deep Dr.Ram !! - Well done - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/13/2014 6:18:00 AM
oh deep and dark write Dr Mehta. I am no fan of firearms at all Hugs Jan xxx
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Date: 9/13/2014 6:13:00 AM
Mehtasaab,I am still in confusion with your poem. A bit tricky development. Please drop some lines. Love. RAJAT
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