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She Dreams of Him

Your mind has designed the perfect lover That sensitive man of your special dreams You wait for him to rip off the covers Late night dinning with kisses and moon beams You are awake and still dreaming of him That sensitive man of your special dreams Alone in the night the lights grow dim Thinking about love and what it all means You are awake and still dreaming of him Real life may not always be filled with steam You try to be thankful but it seems hard Thinking about love and what it all means With imagination you play the card Even though you're aware it isn't real You try to be thankful but it seems hard In the end you can't help how you feel Even though you're aware it isn't real Your mind has designed the perfect lover You wait for him to rip off the covers

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 11/17/2016 10:07:00 AM
Very sensual romantic poem, Richard. I loved it so much. You can really do those terzanelle poems. A gorgeous poem really. Love always.
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Date: 4/16/2015 10:14:00 PM
Dreams are only dreams, Richard. They become reality for some. Lovely write...Hugs
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/17/2015 7:42:00 AM
Thanks Eileen, hugs back.
Date: 3/5/2014 8:48:00 AM
Richard What a wonderfully portrayed picture of how fantasies can keep us full of hope and faith. Nice job Thanks for the sweet comment on my Mamma Bear poem
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/5/2014 9:34:00 AM
My pleasure Robin.
Date: 2/25/2014 4:10:00 AM
That was excellent! I enjoyed the imagination,creativity and excitement of the poem. Bravo!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/25/2014 8:45:00 AM
Thanks Betty.
Date: 3/5/2013 6:57:00 PM
If only what we imagine could become a reality....excellent write! Hugs
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/6/2013 5:30:00 AM
Sometimes what we imagine does become Reality. Hugs back.
Date: 3/3/2013 3:17:00 AM
A 7...and into my favorites!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/3/2013 6:08:00 AM
Thanks
Date: 3/2/2013 9:07:00 AM
Wow, your Terzanelle never failed in fascinating people Rick, two thumbs up! :D enjoy my read tonight - hug, Yanny
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/2/2013 10:11:00 PM
Thanks Yanny, I have wireless here in Mexico so I can keep in contact as well as do som writing.
Date: 3/2/2013 7:13:00 AM
this is a poem everyone can relate to....no matter what we have in real life,our fantasies r more intriguing.....beautifully penned...loved it...:)))
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Irfana Ali Bhat
Date: 3/3/2013 6:59:00 AM
doing fine....living in an uncertain world...wt to do?? we just learn to live with it...:))
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/2/2013 7:50:00 AM
Irfana it is so nice to receive a visit from you. How have you been?
Date: 3/1/2013 2:46:00 PM
yes i have to agree with Eileen below, the flow of this gem, is amazing...
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/1/2013 8:38:00 PM
Plenty a thunder for all. I like when people are comfortable to engage in casual conversation.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/1/2013 8:37:00 PM
Thanks Harry.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/1/2013 3:27:00 PM
Harry! :) Glad you agree my dear! How are you??? ;) Ok...won't steal Richard's thunder here!
Date: 3/1/2013 2:41:00 PM
The inspiration for this write must have been quite intense because it is seamless....It just flows...no pauses, no uncertain moments, no what ifs....it is all there and it is absolutely beautiful! Great write, Richard!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/1/2013 8:37:00 PM
I rarely know where a piece will go until I get going. Thanks for your kind words. I am now off to pack for our trip. Horray!
Date: 3/1/2013 1:45:00 PM
Cute one ..I got a chuckle..Life issues some wild cards sometimes..If this is for a contest, it should be a winner in my book..Thanks for stopping by..Your presence was vey uplifting..Sara
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/1/2013 8:39:00 PM
Your welcome Sarah always a pleasure.
Date: 3/1/2013 10:30:00 AM
You've written this Terzannelle very well Richard and the content is wonderfully thought out and presented. Enjoyed! Always, Annalise
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/1/2013 11:32:00 AM
Thanks Annalise, your presence is a fresh breath of air.
Date: 3/1/2013 7:23:00 AM
This is a tremendous and special write my friend! I am enthralled by the splendor of this incredible poem Richard! What a fabulous piece, quite the lovely poem, Great Work!!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/1/2013 7:28:00 AM
Thanks Russell!

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