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She Doesn'T Talk To People

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Hello, it’s nice to meet you, and, What issues are on your mind? What are the things important to you, and, What do you keep confined? Do you need to resolve conflict, a rage, Or calibrate your financial grief? Or are you lost spiritually, Have you lost your own belief? And do you cope by drinking wine, And then holding a pack of smokes? Or do you hide away from people, Not talking to other folks. If you’re feeling down and out, And you’re mentally not feeling great. Then maybe a nice cushion will help, Where you can sit and meditate.

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Date: 12/18/2016 9:18:00 PM
A lighthearted take on a serious subject, depression. It works, Lewis. It says breathe in such polite, gentle and, even, cute ways! A real joy to read ... CayCay
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Date: 12/19/2016 8:09:00 AM
Thanks CayCay, many ways to target depression.

Book: Reflection on the Important Things