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She Doesn'T See

You are the urgency in my breath, the ragged discourse that falls from my trembling tongue. Everything I need to say, is wrapped around you. The words hang from your skin; ornaments of understanding that I have yearned to pluck. Yet, it seems redundant to pull a flower from your garden, and present it to you like you didn’t know it is beautiful already. I just hope you know that I appreciate you. I see you as you are, in all your tattered elegance; Your supple tears, your steady glide. You’re a ghost in a hall of mirrors, with roses at your feet; Wandering like a child. Quietly hoping to find someone else in the reflection. "I am here…" -James Kelley 2013, All rights reserved.

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Date: 12/24/2013 8:09:00 AM
James Such a heartwarming and deep write. The power of these words grabs the reader and takes them into your inner soul, heart and mind. Great job
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James Kelley
Date: 12/24/2013 8:38:00 AM
Thank you Robin. Merry Christmas
Date: 12/19/2013 8:46:00 AM
"I see you as you are, in all your tattered elegance"...SICK SICK SICK! Through the flaws, through the strengths...you're still real to me. Seriously, this poem should be your quote on Match.com. (real talk) ;-)
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James Kelley
Date: 12/19/2013 9:38:00 AM
haha, think that will reel them in?

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