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She Didnt Care

she didn't care if he loved her or not she didn't care if he knew there were others she didn't care how much he cried raged begged they found him at the bottom of the river she just didn't care

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Funom Makama

Date: 6/25/2020 2:14:00 PM

Oh dear.. What a lovely piece you have here. Your craft is definitely seasoned with lots of creativity. Great poem.

Timothy Mcguire
Date: 6/25/2020 5:02:00 PM

Thank you Funom for the kind words!

Tom Cunningham

Date: 6/24/2020 12:48:00 PM

A sad tale that you hear often. Some people just don't care Tom

Timothy Mcguire
Date: 6/24/2020 4:30:00 PM

Its true, many wonderful poems are written about light and love and fun. I like to write about dark things from time to time to put those emotions out there for folks who are suffering too.