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She Dances With Spirits

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The wind brushes her loose dark red long hair then lifts her gown In a trance, she is lost in her moves when bright orbs surround her Transported to other dimensions where forestry scenes blend in far away Her wistful lean body shows through her dress, she is lifted into thin air As she twirls around, makes no sound, with spirits she dances so free In this phantasy, looking back, blissfully I imagined it were me that day

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Yolanda Nicholsen

Date: 7/13/2023 8:13:00 AM

lovely write enjoyed reading your work

I Am Anaya
Date: 7/13/2023 8:58:00 AM

Thank you, Yolanda. It's nice to have you back!

Sotto Poet

Date: 7/3/2023 7:40:00 PM

Anaya, your work is truly remarkable, it captures the essence of beauty with such vivid imagery and mesmerizing movement. The dance exudes a sheer vitality that is simply unparalleled. In crafting this blissful scene, you have ingeniously portrayed the exquisite grace of the human form and its elegant gestures, resulting in a magnificent poem.

I Am Anaya
Date: 7/13/2023 8:56:00 AM

I'm so grateful for your comments. You let me know that I have achieved a blissful and graceful scene and that means so much to me. Thank you, Sotto Poet for your support :)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/3/2023 7:54:00 AM

Loved your ethereal poem…the red hair and green twirling gown.

I Am Anaya
Date: 7/13/2023 8:50:00 AM

Thank you, Kim! Ethereal indeed! To perfect for this world, phantasm.

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 7/2/2023 11:31:00 PM

How lovely, to dance with spirits in forestry sounds wonderful. Enjoyed the read Anaya… Belle

I Am Anaya
Date: 7/12/2023 10:43:00 AM

It does sound like a nice phantasy. We may have not danced in a forest with spirits but we've danced somewhere and know the feelings it brings on, Belle. Thank you for your read!

Valsa George

Date: 7/2/2023 9:54:00 AM

Lovely image and a wonderful poem highlighting her beautiful body and graceful movements. In her gossamer gown, long hair and thin body, she looks a beautiful Goddess. Well done Anaya !

I Am Anaya
Date: 7/12/2023 10:41:00 AM

Thank you, Valsa. Art prompts me to write. Just one look at the beautiful floating woman inspired my senses and opened my eyes to the realms of phantasy. You obviously saw the same!

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 7/2/2023 7:53:00 AM

Dear Anaya, may you dance blissfully with the spirits. How can one not admire such imagery? Graceful and amazing are the emotions you conjure.

I Am Anaya
Date: 7/12/2023 10:40:00 AM

I do, in my fantasies I am a dancer. One look at the beautiful floating woman inspired my senses and opened my eyes to the realms of phantasy. Thank you!

Speaks Volumes

Date: 7/2/2023 5:46:00 AM

Wow ! This is beautiful Anaya, the images so clear and the movement and vitality of the dance is superb. You created a blissful scene. BOL in the contest, This will do well. Its really delightful.

I Am Anaya
Date: 7/12/2023 10:37:00 AM

Thank you, S.V. Art prompts me to write. Just one look at the beautiful floating woman inspired my senses and opened my eyes to the realms of phantasy.