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"Mommy," she always begs when she hears the rain begin to fall. "May I please go out and play? I love dancing in the rain." I always smile and pull her close then tell her being cold and wet would make her sick. Not once does she frown or get angry with my denial. She only takes my hands in hers and gives me an impish smile. In her sweet voice she says to me, "That's ok, Mommy, but dancing makes me feel free." The rain came again, from dark clouds of fear and worry. Doctors said there was no hope then added they were sorry. My darling daughter was so weak she could hardly eat. She had so little energy, it seemed an effort for her to speak. But when she heard the rain falling, I heard her call to me... "Mommy, may I please go out and play? I love dancing in the rain." I scooped her from her bed on that hot morning in mid July. We danced together in the rain while tears fell from my eyes. I still see the look of pleasure on her face and hear the joy of her laughter. They are the memories I treasure, ones that can never be erased. December 22 2015 Contest entry for Rain Sponsor: Silent One NO NAME

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Date: 12/24/2015 5:10:00 PM
Back again to congratulate you on this beautifully conceived , heartfelt and sad write my friend!!! Your great talent always shines ...
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Date: 12/24/2015 6:30:00 PM
I'm glad for the re-visit. Thank you, Robert. such kind compliments ;)
Date: 12/24/2015 9:27:00 AM
Loved this one Lin. Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 12/24/2015 9:35:00 AM
Thanks very much, Michael.. and I'm glad you like it.
Date: 12/24/2015 7:28:00 AM
when the rains fall, they will feel so warm even in cold if they are poured through your lines. You are superb, fantastic and just wow! Its nice I visited this page. Compliments of the season dear poet!
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Date: 12/24/2015 7:37:00 AM
Thank you for so many generous comments, Funom. Your visits are always appreciated.
Date: 12/24/2015 2:14:00 AM
LIN, Congratulations on your wonderful Rain win. Have yourself a Blessed Christmas and Happy New Years. Smiles & Joy **SKAT**
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Date: 12/24/2015 5:27:00 AM
Thank you.
Date: 12/24/2015 1:54:00 AM
Congrats on ur awesome win with this lovely write Lin!
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Date: 12/24/2015 5:27:00 AM
Thank you.
Date: 12/22/2015 8:23:00 PM
My friend this is truly an awesome write. How I wish, I could have even just once danced in the rain with my two children , both were born dead, in the mid 70's.. You have penned a heart tugging and beautifully written write! A7
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Date: 12/23/2015 3:53:00 AM
oh Robert, I'm very sorry about your little babies, and that this made you sad. I appreciate your sharing your pain.
Date: 12/22/2015 2:15:00 PM
This is lovely Lin, And you have done a wonderful job of capturing those emotions!!! Best Wishes Kevin
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Date: 12/22/2015 2:33:00 PM
Thank you so much, Kevin. Those are very nice compliments. Well wishes to you, too.

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