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She Dances

"She dances she glances Beyond her shoulder She peers Looking back Her beautiful smile She poses in the mirror" She swings, she sways Pliable like a gymnast With graceful ease In frenzied joy Like a droplet On lotus leaf!

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Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 7/15/2023 10:54:00 AM

Oh, how sweet the dance! Congratulations on your win Valsa! :)

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/14/2023 8:33:00 AM

Congratulation on your win. I can see her dancing/swings/sways. Have a blessed weekend writing away.............

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/20/2023 12:43:00 PM

Great imagery.. Best of luck. i never win with Rick or I'd try this myself.

Jay Narain

Date: 6/20/2023 12:13:00 PM

Wow, nice imagery with words, like drops on the lotus petals.

Michael Tor

Date: 6/20/2023 12:07:00 PM

Lovely imagery created by your words as we see this motion filled dance, Valsa. Thank you for sharing...

Stephan McBride

Date: 6/20/2023 11:21:00 AM

Love the creativity in the poem layout, and the gracefully poem : )

Buhagiar Victor

Date: 6/20/2023 9:37:00 AM

A delightful dance, This poem has my full admiration.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/20/2023 7:25:00 AM

A beauty!

Sotto Poet

Date: 6/20/2023 6:46:00 AM

It appears that she is quite content and an appealing person. Valsa, your contribution to the poem's prompt words conveys something really cool.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/20/2023 6:46:00 AM

- A joyful dance, Valsa :) - hugs

Vijay Pandit

Date: 6/20/2023 5:43:00 AM

She is full of grace and joy. Nice complement to poem given, Valsa.