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She Danced

The flowers danced within the breeze The music box dancer danced with ease She danced and danced within his heart For he loved her from the very start

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Lea O'Brien

Date: 2/15/2010 6:35:00 PM

What a romantic poem! Perfect for Valentines day

Mac Mcgovern

Date: 2/3/2010 12:20:00 PM

Reminds of the first time I met my wife. I know it reminds, because it feels the same way 32 years later. Thank you for the memories and your wonderfully written poem. Much apppreciated. Mac

Rhia Madison Thomer

Date: 2/1/2010 9:57:00 PM

Hmm beautifully written in such a few lines, I think I am foinf to fav this. Thanks for the comments <3 Madison

Margaret Foster

Date: 1/31/2010 5:36:00 PM

A sweet and gentle Quatrain that brings a smile...thank you...Margaret

James Fraser

Date: 1/31/2010 7:36:00 AM

Delightful Quatrain Sara >> James

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 1/30/2010 5:09:00 AM

Romantic perfection through you words... Absolutely great, Sara !!! Love, Dane

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 1/29/2010 12:09:00 PM

Very sweet indeed.. Charma:)

Scarlett Sepulvado Anderson

Date: 1/29/2010 9:04:00 AM

How very sweet. Thanks for visiting me and your kind comments. Have a great day! Scarlett

Bojosi Ditshwele

Date: 1/29/2010 6:45:00 AM

Love this one Sara keep writing these sweet poems of yours. thanx for your comments

Virginia Mitchell

Date: 1/29/2010 3:32:00 AM

This brings to mind my childhood days, when I mused at the "music box dancer" : )

Mohammad Yamin

Date: 1/28/2010 4:11:00 PM

An awesome write, Sara - perfect in rhyme -pleasing to read. A tribute to your talent. Thanks for your educated comments on my poem The Call of Death. You have captured the spirit of the poem in your comments. -Mohammad

John Freeman

Date: 1/28/2010 9:25:00 AM

A top notch rhyme Sara, Beautiful thought in your Quatrain. Sincerely, love, Moses

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/28/2010 9:19:00 AM

awwwwww Sara this is so beautiful. Bring us more please. Love, Carol

Brian Strand

Date: 1/28/2010 12:43:00 AM

Sounds like my wife and my story Sara.Nice one for the favourites.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments today. Ginger beer is a refreshing non-achol soft drink in England

William Kershaw

Date: 1/27/2010 10:49:00 PM

Sara, Brief and sweet. well done dear lady. Thanks for your kind words. They mean more than you know. Love, Will

Colleen Bono

Date: 1/27/2010 6:18:00 PM

short and sweet.I hope you had a great day.I posted a new poem.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/27/2010 4:03:00 PM

Such beauty from u today... dancing is such a lovely expressive form ... as poetry ... u have captured its magic ... thankxxx for sharing ... luv.. Linda-Marie..