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She Carried Red Roses

I recall the story I was told when so young Of a girl so beautiful, her life barely begun She was all but fifteen on her way home from school Taken at will by a crazy mountain fool She disappeared, assuming they both went to ground There was many a search, she never was found Days passed, and weeks into years As our community moved on, only her family shed tears Then came the day when my story was retold Inside my mind my memories to unfold In another town far away from the past Across the street my eyes did cast For I spotted a young lady, with her father I presumed But something clicked as my past was resumed Thinking back to the reports and the newspaper clips She always carried red roses as they matched her red lips Is that her, that fifteen year old girl Across the road living a different world Do I intervene or lets things be Is she the girl from my past I see http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/dark-4.php

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 8/13/2010 3:53:00 PM
amazing James just powerful the reader sees and feels what you write x
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Date: 8/2/2010 2:32:00 AM
You have a knack for choosing great titles that catch the readers attention. This one is amazing as is the write. Sensitive and beautifully written, as always ~ Sharon :)
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Date: 8/1/2010 7:54:00 AM
A tough question James.. I enjoyed this piece.. You left the reader to wonder whether it could be her and what I would have done if I was in your shoes. ~ Wilma
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Date: 8/1/2010 4:52:00 AM
tmfvs,almost a fairytale,great.
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Date: 8/1/2010 4:50:00 AM
Sometimes certain people remind us of other people we knew or held dear in our past. .You should intervene,it could be another girl which carries the same red lipstick,the same pain and the same heart,beautiful,I love your poetry James,C.C
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Date: 7/31/2010 6:11:00 PM
It is simply utterly beautiful poem. James. What a story told well penned
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Date: 7/31/2010 5:33:00 PM
very good poem. Loved it! Sierra :)
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Date: 7/31/2010 5:05:00 PM
Could be...So many youth disappear to somewhere..Hauled away by someone to somewhere...Some to torment and death ...Some to torment and life..Good topic to bring to the forfront to remind us..Sara
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