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She Calls

shrilly she calls him he stares blankly into space again the call comes he smiles while contemplating what he might have for dessert

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 1/10/2013 8:06:00 PM
this one can make you think of different things. I quite like it. last word typo!!
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Date: 11/5/2012 8:29:00 PM
Ha! Oh, the possibilites. Um, I don't usual play tag, but I thought you might like to take a gander at my sonnet, The Song of Deborah... did I capture her? Not an easy thing to do! So many layers! Smiles from Cyndi
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Charles Henderson
Date: 11/5/2012 9:59:00 PM
sent you a soup mail.
Date: 11/5/2012 8:11:00 AM
love it Charles. Block it out for dessert.
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