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She Ate My Aching

she ate my aching sweet tender sushi sea I am her loving worshiped lunch

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 8/5/2015 3:52:00 PM
from the eyes of the meal....this has great appeal....and a delicacy such as this....is just too sweet to resist....;)
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Lady Ristretto
Date: 8/5/2015 4:14:00 PM
Why, thank you, sir, for your charming couplets! They were a nice way to begin my day. (I can rhyme, too :)

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