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She says she's sad. She sings sad songs. Safe, scared, still sane, serious - she sculptures statues. She saw some scenes - she says seemed sins. So she says. Satisfied she sleeps... 10/09/2012 written by Lucilla M. Carrillo

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Debbie Duncan

Date: 2/22/2013 1:49:00 PM

Seems she had fun writing this, thank you for reading " I call her name " you have a great day Lucy ;}

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/10/2012 9:34:00 PM

Lucy, a lovely verse... deep.... staying away is good...pd

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 10/14/2012 1:31:00 PM

Wonderful form. Very enjoyed your work I have read today. Brilliant poetry. Luv n hugs Michael

Rachel St.Cross

Date: 10/11/2012 3:27:00 PM

‡ She Seems And Sounds So Beautiful For Some Reason ? Tis A Sign Of A Gifted Poet To Create Such An Image In Breath !nd Life. Bringing To Light A Canvas Which Breathes. Love, Rachel ‡

Len Gasun

Date: 10/10/2012 8:49:00 PM

hmmmmnnn....awesome write my friend, Lucilla. I love it. Thanks for sharing, your precious time reading my poem and wonderful comments. Love, Leonora

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/10/2012 4:04:00 PM

this is very interesting one! Like a mini bio of someone. Who is it, Lucilla?

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/10/2012 2:56:00 PM

BRAVO LUCY ON GREAT ALLITERATION IN THIS PASSIONATE PIECE .. BEST OF LUCK LUV ..

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/10/2012 2:52:00 PM

Interesting lines that you have penned..Enjoyed reading..I hope that it is not you sad..Thanks for stopping by..Your presence at my work is always uplifting..Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/10/2012 1:35:00 PM

Stopping by your poetry list today to tell you thank you for your kind comments on my writing. Your comment was truly appreciated Lucilla. Love, Carol

Harry Horsman

Date: 10/10/2012 10:40:00 AM

Oh this is clever poetry, very smart girl you are, a joy to read you Lucilla

Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 10/10/2012 12:53:00 PM

Thank you Harry; I was just messing around with words. You'd be suprised what you can come up with. Lucy

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/10/2012 3:25:00 AM

Very good written, Lucilla - I like it. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 10/10/2012 12:51:00 PM

Thank you Anne Lise, I'm glad that you like it. lucy

Robert Pettit

Date: 10/10/2012 12:25:00 AM

Your title reminded me of a cheap B-picture from the sixties starring bombshell Ursula Andress. It is difficult to write a coherent poem with all the words starting with just one letter. You pulled the trick off rather well here.

Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 10/10/2012 12:50:00 PM

Robert - you look very young, yet you talk about the 60's like you had lived back then.Thanks for reading. Lucy