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She’s a quiet whisperer so listen closely to hear her She knows who you are and who you were She plays the notes that cause your soul to stir Let the lines of your reality blur She sees what you can’t see Follow her lead she’ll set you free She guides you to where you are and where you wish to be Dancing within her imagination there’s no desire to flee She’s the ground sky and sea This and every world is hers Let her comfort you with a purr Kiss those butterfly flitting eyes She’s your angel in disguise Forget logic on her wings rise She is not yours for all time Loving her is the unattainable prize

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Date: 4/19/2020 3:06:00 PM
Lovely write, my friend. Beautiful words to live by. Blessings
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/19/2020 4:25:00 PM
Thanks. ;0)
Date: 4/8/2020 2:48:00 PM
Hello Richard Lamoureux, yes loving is the unattainable prize. I like this line. Enjoy your day. Stay safe my friend.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/19/2020 4:25:00 PM
Thanks Darlene, hugs Rick.
Date: 3/31/2020 4:38:00 PM
Well Done Richard. A lovely piece filled with emotion. God Bless, JB
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Date: 3/28/2020 10:45:00 AM
A beautiful write. Your pen was full of love. Enjoy your day.........
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/28/2020 12:30:00 PM
Thanks Paula.
Date: 3/26/2020 11:21:00 PM
Wish to see your 'SHE' in muse. Stay safe n well.
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Date: 3/25/2020 2:22:00 PM
Richard, I love the imagery and rhyming pattern in this piece...leaves room for interpretation too! P.S. I responded to your question in Senryu- Baton. Take care and stay safe. God Bless!
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Date: 3/22/2020 10:21:00 PM
Great example for the contest, Richard.
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Date: 3/21/2020 9:18:00 AM
How beautiful your Muse is. It was wonderful catching a glimpse of her. Into my FAV’s Hugs, SuZ
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Date: 3/20/2020 10:42:00 AM
Hi Richard, your Muse does sing such a wonderful song. Your words give peace to the heart. Your Muse does paint such wondrous visions in the mind. This one has to be a Fav, my friend. Have a wonderful Friday. Your friend always....Mike.
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Date: 3/18/2020 6:46:00 AM
An aMUSE'ing write, Rick. Great stuff!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/18/2020 8:46:00 AM
Thanks Charles. ;0)
Date: 3/17/2020 9:58:00 AM
Does she have a brother? Seriously, Richard, this is REALLY beautiful! Janice
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/17/2020 11:40:00 AM
Ha ha, great response.
Date: 3/17/2020 7:35:00 AM
What beautiful music seen and felt and not so much heard...lovely, Richard.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/17/2020 8:18:00 AM
Thanks Reason.
Date: 3/16/2020 5:03:00 PM
This is inspired stuff, beginning to end. "...ground sky and sea" in particular is very effective. Thanks for invite to stop by. Glad I did and will be back. Best to you.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/17/2020 8:19:00 AM
Thanks Eric, your visits are always appreciated.
Date: 3/14/2020 1:07:00 PM
What a wonderful companion sharing a world of words, imagination and infinite wonders! An inspiring beauty, all the chambers of the heart and the mind are her abode.. A charming portrait every single poet would aspire to behold and hold! I liked and enjoyed so much your great piece of Art, Richard! An amazing rhyme! My deepest regards and blessings to.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/17/2020 8:20:00 AM
Thanks for your visit and blessings.
Date: 3/14/2020 12:44:00 AM
I love that you talk of the ground sea and sky as a she, a person, and that loving her is an unattainable prize. A powerful poem Rick Well pened ny friend. Blessing, hugs, Jenny.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/17/2020 8:21:00 AM
Thanks for the visit and hugs Jennifer.
Date: 3/13/2020 4:37:00 PM
wow, this is so cool, Richard. What beautiful poetry.
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Date: 3/11/2020 10:35:00 AM
Thanks for your visits. I will drop by to see what you are all up to. ;0)
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Date: 3/10/2020 6:24:00 PM
Your muse brings you superb inspiration, Richard...and she definitely knows which buttons to press! Regards // paul
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Date: 3/10/2020 1:27:00 PM
So wistful and longing, especially the last lines, intriguing-
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Date: 3/10/2020 5:01:00 AM
An excellently penned gem Rick!
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Date: 3/10/2020 3:51:00 AM
Wow, one hell of a dedication, Richard, love the flow the rhyme and rhythm.
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Date: 3/9/2020 6:28:00 PM
How absolutely thrilling is this piece!! Loved every line... you have a magical muse. I hope she keeps whispering in your ears...
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/11/2020 9:03:00 AM
Me too. ;0) She has been playing hard to get this last little while. Hugs Rick.
Date: 3/9/2020 1:20:00 PM
I wondered if you were referring to your muse then I saw your response to Jenish. Well written Richard, without her we'd be well and truly lost. Tom
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/11/2020 9:02:00 AM
Thanks Tom, sometimes I think she cheats on me *lol*
Date: 3/9/2020 7:07:00 AM
WOW! She has the power--a deep write, Richard.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/9/2020 8:39:00 AM
Thanks Vijay. ;0)
Date: 3/9/2020 12:31:00 AM
lovely poem.. May be she is your muse..
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/9/2020 8:39:00 AM
Bravo Jenish, you got it right.
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