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Shattered Leaves

Shattered leaves autumn's wave swirls on old trees

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Kim Merryman

Date: 3/21/2012 4:06:00 PM

Congrats on your HM in PD's contest, Adeleke! Love, Kim

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/19/2012 6:24:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement in P.D.'s "Haiku" contest Adeleke. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/18/2012 5:22:00 PM

this is lovely, Adeleke. Next time put your name on it. She has told us in the blogs that we need our names on all our entries for her contests. Then I am sure you will score higher!!

Ralph Taylor

Date: 3/16/2012 8:36:00 AM

Congrats, Adeleke. Excellent. Enjoyed. Nice going. Ralph

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/15/2012 10:57:00 PM

ADELEKE, ~.Congratulations in my haiku contest ;-) THANK YOU FOR SUPPORTING ;-) my contest... Enjoyed your entry,~ always*PD

Madeleine Mclaughlin

Date: 3/15/2012 3:46:00 AM

I get an impression of falling leaves here and the bareness of the trees without their cover. Well done.