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Shatter Me

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Tic Toc Tell tale signs Dead angels counting time The ballerina dancing inside Her snow flake orb of light Childhood dreams Dancing in circles while screaming Shatter me Fragile notes upon the strings of life Fragile hopes shattered on shores remote Inside dead dreams does a childhood float Take me to the mountain tops Let me reach to the skies My shattered dreams seeks the heavens to escape this worldly globe where I dance In desperation Shattered dreams Pretty silhouettes Cracked pottery all around Teapots in pieces Hopes become only shattered dreams So it seems

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Amy Megquier

Date: 2/4/2016 9:25:00 PM

Starkly beautiful imagery, well done.

Arthur Vaso
Date: 2/4/2016 9:51:00 PM

Thank you very much Amy :)

Funom Makama

Date: 1/28/2016 8:01:00 AM

Words so gracious. Beauty so outspoken and creativity so explicit. I love this. Thanks for the beyond 7 share.

Arthur Vaso
Date: 2/4/2016 9:50:00 PM

A double thank you! :) Cheers

Arthur Vaso

Date: 1/26/2016 5:39:00 PM

Thank you kind sir for such positive comments!

Michael Whatley

Date: 1/25/2016 6:32:00 AM

Very deep and potent devices in this piece, Arthur! Very well written.

Arthur Vaso
Date: 1/26/2016 5:39:00 PM

Thank you kind sir for such positive comments!

Funom Makama

Date: 1/23/2016 12:26:00 PM

Wisdom and arts hug as twins in between your lines. A wonderful 7

Arthur Vaso
Date: 1/23/2016 11:09:00 PM

You are so kind Funom , thank you

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 1/18/2016 4:38:00 PM

I have some glue for all those teapots pieces : ). Somehow very sad , even if very beautiful , sad indeed Arthur.

Arthur Vaso
Date: 1/23/2016 11:08:00 PM

My basement is flooding, might need some of that glue!

Kp Nunez

Date: 1/16/2016 11:08:00 PM

" I pirouette in the dark / I see the stars through me / Tired mechanical heart / Beats til the song disappears ..." Beautiful, haunting poem after the Lindsey Stirling's lyrics. Teenagers love the song, mine does. This Mom love your poem :-)

Arthur Vaso
Date: 1/23/2016 11:07:00 PM

Thank you Beautiful Mom!