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Sharpness of His Accusations

She feels the sharpness of his accusations, trembles and shakes with every strike, injustice corruption beneath her frustrations, a short noose around her neck too tight. Trembles and shakes with every strike, malevolent attacks engulfed in his offense, a short noose around her neck too tight, contradictions of fear living in suspense. Malevolent attacks engulfed in his offense, injustice corruption beneath her frustrations, contradictions of fear living in suspense, she feels the sharpness of his accusations. Written By: Laura Loo Date Written: March 17, 2016

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Date: 3/17/2016 10:50:00 PM
Wonderful write, Laura, you have mastered the form and the painting you have painted on your canvas is profound... :) hugs Eve
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Eve Roper
Date: 3/18/2016 8:40:00 AM
I felt the same way when I saw Broken Wing's I was fascinated
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Lu Loo
Date: 3/18/2016 7:48:00 AM
Thank you Eve, it's because of you! I was SOOOOOO confused for days on how to write using this form for your contest. I have no idea why? ha but once I got the hang of it I enjoyed using it..:)-luloo
Date: 3/17/2016 8:56:00 PM
Hi Laura, Excellent piece-- "injustice corruption beneath her frustrations, a short noose around her neck too tight." is well-deserving of the refrain. Well done! Cheers, Brian
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Lu Loo
Date: 3/17/2016 8:57:00 PM
many thanks Brian :)-luloo

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