Shark

Deadly predator beneath the waters mouths in carriage of sharp saws swift and strong, crazy for blood.

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Date: 2/1/2016 12:15:00 PM

I'm a great white fan. I have a large JAWS poster in the mid's of my living room, :) Predators.. awesome... SKAT

Funom Makama
Date: 2/3/2016 9:05:00 AM

Damn! I can never visit you even in the dreams.... Lol! Thank you so much SKAT A

Date: 1/28/2016 8:01:00 AM

Inspiring!! Ah--there are so many sharks around.

Funom Makama
Date: 1/28/2016 11:10:00 AM

hahahaha... Yes, some are above the waters... thanks for your contributions

Date: 1/27/2016 10:54:00 PM

My ex gf is now a shark? Kidding! Loved this haiku Funom!

Funom Makama
Date: 1/28/2016 8:01:00 AM

hahahaha... I really do not know what you mean, I just hope she doesn't love blood or love biting. Thank you so much for your comment

Date: 1/25/2016 1:38:00 PM

I was bitten by a mako shark many years ago in Mexico so this I know so well. Thank you for sharing.

Funom Makama
Date: 1/28/2016 8:00:00 AM

Thank you so much Brian Davey