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Sharing My Bowl of Soup

The list of ingredients is far too big But know this, the soup turns out fine For the people that stir it, they’re marvelous And they’re friends that I like to call mine In fact they’re the reason the soup is perfect They stir it, they heat it and they are it So come take a bowl of the soup I adore And perhaps you’ll also be a part of it

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Heidie Buys

Date: 8/12/2008 4:35:00 PM

The secret is that variety is the spice of life and we sure have variety and even spice in this soup. A fun write, good one. Regards Heidie

Date: 8/12/2008 12:56:00 PM

I assume you are talking about our writing community with this creative poem. I like the way you weave your message through the lines. I love being part of The Soup. I'm sure you do too. Thank you for sharing this uplifting piece with us and for your kind comment. Karen

James Foulk

Date: 8/11/2008 12:08:00 PM

this poem made me want to go have a bowl of soup, this was a very thoughtful and warm poem.

Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 8/11/2008 9:21:00 AM

It's the variety of ingredients that makes it special. Vince

Carrie Richards

Date: 8/11/2008 9:09:00 AM

If I have to be boiled in a pot of soup, no better company to be in, than all of you! Spicy, warm, healthy, and comforting!! Yummy soup, indeed! ......Carrie

Kristin Reynolds

Date: 8/11/2008 6:44:00 AM

YAY - awesome little ditty, and you are just the right ingrediant for this fine soup! Love Kristin

Michael Jordan

Date: 8/11/2008 5:33:00 AM

Great job Michael - We are all part of this bowl of soup - God Bless my friend