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Shaping the Night

If I could shape the night it would be round and hollowed out to hold dreams drifting formless before being born in sleep. I would hang the walls with shiny mirrors to reflect each star moving overhead and have a pond on which the moon could shed its light. If I could shape the night I would have curtains of gossamer thread to catch each passing sound and make music of noise, hoist sails that fill on the slightest breeze to give breath to a poem and turn the dark into song.

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Date: 9/24/2023 8:17:00 AM
If we "could shape the night to give breath to a poem and turn the dark into a song," I think I'd put sunrise on hold each morning. Imagine the verses we would birth to write them as wistfully as you penned this one, Paul.
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Paul Willason
Date: 9/25/2023 5:12:00 AM
Too kind Lin.....your comments are always valued and encouraging.... moreover, thoughtful. Do look forward to them...thanks. Paul
Date: 9/24/2023 5:33:00 AM
I held my breath reading that Paul, my mind danced to recall images of a reflected moon, floating on those moments as welcomed sleep arrives and all is soft and delicate. Beautiful!
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Paul Willason
Date: 9/25/2023 5:07:00 AM
Thankyou DD....appreciate that you gave the little poem your time and that it returned something. Take care, Paul.

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