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Shame Is Five-Fingered

Slapped with shame left a print of distain the mark is still left long after it came like a stain no matter how hard you try to take away the pain you reilize you lost more than you gained slapped with shame left with a print of distain the pain thats left is a dark red stain

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Date: 6/30/2011 8:19:00 AM
shame...this really feels like shame...reminds me of it. Great description Ky. Thanks for posting it for all of us to read!
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Ky Gatchell
Date: 7/1/2011 4:07:00 PM
thank you lots
Date: 6/27/2011 4:00:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Ky. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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Ky Gatchell
Date: 6/27/2011 6:30:00 AM
I appreciate that thank you
Date: 6/26/2011 6:42:00 PM
Wow, this provides a great vignette of shame. This poem really made me feel something. Thanks
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Ky Gatchell
Date: 6/26/2011 9:08:00 PM
thank you
Date: 6/26/2011 6:42:00 PM
Wow, this provides a great vignette of shame. This poem really made me feel something. Thanks
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