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Below is the poem entitled SHALLOW DEEP which was written by poet Neldy Jolo. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Deep is not shallow
Shallow make you deep
So be deep to become shallow...

To Fats...

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  1. Date: 2/3/2014 3:51:00 PM
    ;) Very nice play on words; while still filled with meaning. Enjoyed