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Shallow Breath

Soft moonlit eyes that paralyze Unbridled passion on the rise The room afire to faded light Fragrant desire fills up the night As worlds dissolve, so unaware Entangled in your casual stare Nowhere hide. No way to see No self control inside of me Slow motions move through tangled time In shallow breath I feel that I’m Adrift upon your velvet sea Your captive for eternity …Jeff Bresee

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/12/2010 12:05:00 PM
Woah. I love the ending. And the beginning! Very strong emotion. Great poem.
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