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Shallow

You should be an interior decorator in an insane asylum your colors don't match your words don't match I see your mouth move but it drones vanilla

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 3/16/2009 11:33:00 AM
Well, I actually like vanilla, but not in this poem. Some people really suck ~lol~ ! Nice work Ron. Love, Shar
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Date: 3/15/2009 9:45:00 PM
Powerfully emotional in just a few lines. Excellent! Loving your writing more and more! Smiles from Lolita
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