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Shall We Retourne

Unravelling Ireland Postcard collection as a teen Languishing to travel Ireland India's first Miss World's abode Opened vistas of hope one day .... Languishing to travel the world Lived a fanciful dreamy world The cascading mountainous blooms Beautified The First Fifty Dates India's first Miss World's abode In world's best heritage islands Crystalline lakes with looming cliffs Artists flout its forty green shades Opened vistas of hope one day Unravelling nine most haunted Scanning spooky sea safaris Golden eagle wings to Ireland TENTH November 18, 2015 Contest : Shall We Retourne Sponsor : Debbie Guzzi * Reference has been made to the Golden Eagle as it has been reintroduced in Ireland in the Glenveagh National Park under the Environment and Heritage Project.

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Date: 11/27/2015 3:19:00 PM
Shall We Retourne sounds like a tough one but you did it with this winner !!! Way to go with this win..Congrats..Sara
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 11/27/2015 6:24:00 PM
Sarah, you are so appreciative! Thanks!
Date: 11/26/2015 8:55:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Balveen! Love, Kim
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 11/26/2015 9:03:00 PM
Thanks Kim! So kind of you! Love, Balveen
Date: 11/22/2015 9:12:00 AM
If you had connected the verse to a holy day it would have ranked in the top 5. Conrad's and thanks so much for trying & brilliantly succeeding at a new form!Light & Love
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 11/22/2015 9:56:00 AM
Thanks for your guidance Debbie! Love
Date: 11/21/2015 11:27:00 PM
Balveen, Congratulations on your win. ...Love SKAT
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 11/22/2015 9:56:00 AM
Thanks Skat
Date: 11/19/2015 3:44:00 PM
Beautiful imagery and alliteration - I hope you get to visit Ireland one day Balveen it is truly beautiful I have been there about 6 times - I will wave to you from across the ocean I live on the Isle of Man mid way between Ireland and England:-)hugs jan xx
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 11/20/2015 5:22:00 AM
If God wills, then it is Ireland and Isle of Man! Love, Balveen

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